Tuesday, September 9, 2014

My first day I fell off mt horse

My first day I fell off my horse


I put my foot up and over my horse then in the stirrups I grab the strap then my horse takes off.She gallops as fast as the wind my hair flicks up and down and in my face.Then someone interrupts me "Summah the phones for you" Reivyn shouts my dog comes up behind her and scares my horse then my horse bucks her back feet up then flipped me forward and winded me Reivyn went to go get dad and my dog was still chasing my horse my horse jumps over the fence then my dad comes running over to me then I say "can you get my horse she is running away" then dad runs to his truck then buckles up and finds my horse.I get up and walk inside then my dad found my horse and put her in the barn.

2 comments:

  1. This story is sequenced well Summah. Please see me to help you with punctuation before you post your writing. Well done.

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  2. I will do that thank you

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